Here’s the second scene! I had fun writing this one, but I definitely felt like I was hitting a wall with the beginning sections. It can definitely be hard for me to get into the zone when I’m writing, and I often feel like the first few pages come off as a little more forced, and a little less effective. It’s hard that I’m also using a device with this piece where the beginning of each scene is a “Fun-Fact” monologue, because then it’s that opening sequence that suffers. Regardless, I’m already liking the differences in this version quite a bit. I like adding the new character of SHOES, and breaking this scene into a few scenes for the second draft I’m hoping will really help with the build of the story.

That’s all for today, hope you like what you read!

(you can also go back and read the first scene, which was in a previous post)