This is an old project that I just decided to revisit! Keep in mind, that this blog is for works-in-progress, and the first few scenes of this are definitely in that zone. I was still figuring out the characters, changing their names, their attributes, their accents, everything. Starting on page 13 is what I’ve written recently, and I think it’s more reflective of where I want the story to go. Normally I wouldn’t have included the first 12 pages just to show you page 13 and beyond, but I thought the context might be helpful. I’ll hopefully start on the second act and maybe cleaning act 1 tomorrow! Thanks everyone.